❖ Unit 10 ❖ Brain Drain ❖ Writing ❖

The Argumentative Essay

An argumentative essay defends one position with strong reasons. Unlike the balanced "adv/disadv" essay (Unit 9), here you take a clear stand.

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Essay structure

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Sample essay — "Brain drain harms Africa: I agree"

Model essay (about 180 words)

Introduction. The phenomenon of brain drain — the emigration of skilled professionals to developed countries — has reached alarming levels in Africa. In my opinion, brain drain is extremely harmful to African development, and African governments must take urgent action against it.

Argument 1. First and foremost, brain drain represents a devastating loss of human capital. Countries invest huge sums in educating doctors, engineers and researchers — only to see them leave and serve foreign economies. For instance, more than 100,000 trained African professionals work in the West, depriving the continent of essential expertise.

Argument 2. Furthermore, brain drain slows down development. Hospitals lack doctors, universities lack professors, and research stagnates. When the best minds leave, those who remain struggle to build modern institutions.

Argument 3. Last but not least, brain drain creates a vicious cycle. The more professionals leave, the worse conditions become, pushing even more to emigrate.

Conclusion. To sum up, brain drain robs Africa of its most valuable resource: its talent. Governments must offer better salaries, modern facilities and political stability to keep skilled workers — and to encourage those abroad to return.

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Useful phrases for argumentation

Stating your position

Introducing arguments

Giving examples

Acknowledging the other side

Concluding

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Common Bac topics

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The argumentative paragraph

Each argument follows the SEX formula:

SEX in action

S: Brain drain slows down national development.

E: When the best engineers, doctors and teachers leave, the country loses the very people needed to build modern infrastructure and improve health and education systems.

X: For example, Sub-Saharan Africa has only one doctor per 10,000 inhabitants, partly because so many medical graduates emigrate to Europe and North America.

❖ Key Takeaways ❖

① Choose a clear position

Don't sit on the fence. Pick FOR or AGAINST and defend it strongly.

② 3 strong arguments > 5 weak ones

Each argument should be supported by an example, fact or statistic.

③ Mention the opposite view once

Saying "Some may argue X, but…" shows nuance and intelligence — without weakening your stance.

❖ Exam tip

In the exam, plan briefly: Position → 3 arguments → examples → conclusion. Linkers are essential — they show the marker that you can structure ideas.